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Let's dive into the bayou, shall we?
I love setting! It is like a character to me. 
So let me give you a tour of the town that is my book's namesake. 
And we'll end our trip with a short exert from BROKEN BAYOU…
The Town of Broken bayou
 
X marks the spot!
The namesake for my debut is a fictions town in the very real West Feliciana Parish. North of Baton Rouge and east of St. Francisville. But my made-up town doesn’t have the tourism and, therefore, the money St. Francisville has. 
 
Setting can create a mood for your book. I think of Lonesome Dove as a great example. I felt like I had grit in my mouth as I read it! And on the opposite spectrum there's The Martian. It had me concentrating on my breaths as it took me through a world with no oxygen. 
 
On the same questionnaire Amazon sent about my cover, they asked about my setting. Setting is important to a publisher not only to determine mood and tone but also to determine your audience, originality, and genre expectations.
 
Here is the question and my answer:
 
What is the setting of your book?
Note geographical region, year/era, season, and any defining characteristics of the setting. 
 
Southern Louisiana, August 2018, small town There is a deep bayou that runs next to the town with a bridge going over it. Tall levees flank both sides of the bayou. One side is groomed, one side is wild and unkempt. Large oaks with Spanish moss, an old historical home, a diner, a Main street with clapboard stores - most businesses boarded up It's hot and humid and the town is a short drive to the Mississippi River. It's neighboring town is a tourist hot spot but Broken Bayou doesn't reap those rewards. It's a "drive-through" type of town, most people never stop there, unless pulled over for speeding. The closest big cities are Baton Rouge and New Orleans.
 
Here are three places in Broken Bayou that hold special meaning to my protagonist, Dr. Willa Watters. 
 
 
Shadow Bluff
Shadow Bluff is an old southern home that once belonged to Dr. Willa's great aunts. This home was her refuge from the chaos of her childhood. It was a place she, her mother, and sister visited every summer.
I used Oak Alley as a reference but Shadow Bluff was not nearly as nice.
 
 
Taylor's Marketplace
Taylor's Marketplace and Bait Shop is where Willa worked during her summer visits to Broken Bayou. It is owned by a woman who holds a special place in Willa's heart, Ermine Taylor.
I based it on a real place, Taylortown Store. A place I visited every time I headed to Lake Bisteneau to see my grandparents.
 
 
The Bayou
The bayou is the place where Dr. Willa thought she'd buried her secrets for good. It is also a setting that is crucial to my plot. Dr. Willa isn't the only one who buried something there.
This is a photo I took of a real spot in my backyard where I go for inspiration.
 
And speaking of bayous, one of my early freelance editors in San Francisco sent her notes back with this question: What does a bayou look like?
 
A perfect example of how an editor can help you gain perspective. So I added this moment when Dr. Willa sees the bayou again after years of being away.
(Krystal Lynn is her mother)
 
Broken Bayou weaves below me like a muddy S. Eighteen miles of river water, four of which amble north to south through town. The side I’m standing on has a few large oaks scattered along the levee, but most of the trees and scrub brush are on the opposite bank. Broken Bayou diverts from a river east of here whose name I can’t remember and meets back up with that same river somewhere downstream. It’s narrow but deep, like a lot of waterways in this area. Well, it used to be deep. The drought I’ve been hearing about is taking its toll. The original water line is now several inches above the actual water.
I once loved trying to swim bank to bank in one breath, but I never succeeded. It always took three breaths. Along with the smell of fish and hot mud, I can almost smell the pineapple-scented suntan oil Krystal Lynn used to slather on me, telling me I needed a good base tan for boys to like me.
 
By the time you’re done reading Broken Bayou, I hope you feel as if you’ve visited the town and walked among not only its live oaks and narrow streets but also its fun cast of characters - whom I will introduce you to in my next newsletter!
 
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