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It's time for your weekly dose of story and strategy to help you feel better AND write better in your biz. (HOORAY!)
Here's where we're headed today, First name / friend!
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He pulled a bag of breadsticks out of the massive Olive Garden to-go bag.
 
And then another.
 
And another.
 
“Sooo, do you think we ordered enough breadsticks?” he asked, half joking, looking back at me over his shoulder.
 
But I was not fazed.
 
Not surprised.
 
I knew exactly how many breadsticks I’d ordered. 
 
28 breadsticks, to be exact.
 
And not because I went all Type A, don’t-miss-a-single-detail on the online order form.
 
(I save THAT energy for my client work, thank you very much 💅)
 
But because Olive Garden literally told me.
 
They had a RUNNING TOTAL of how many breadsticks were currently included with my order sitting at the bottom of my lil food basket.
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I was ordering dinner for 6.
 
4 adults (the in-laws were in town) and two kids (who, it really was possible, might’ve ONLY eaten breadsticks).

I absolutely *LIVE* for Olive Garden breadsticks, and only eat them about once every four years.
 
So yeah, we were getting 28 breadsticks.
 
And it was 100% the right decision.
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But I bet I know WHY they added that little breadstick counter to the cart page.
 
Because everything comes with breadsticks on that menu.
 
The amount of breadsticks included with each dish is listed on it's item page, but it’s not always super easy to see.
 
So when you get to breadsticks in the double didgies? 
 
You lose track FAST.
 
They probably got tired of people pulling out bag after bag after bag of breadsticks and being pissed (and feeling ripped off)—so they made it super freaking clear how many breadsticks people should expect to see as they unpacked their containers of Chicken Alfredo.
 
They became even more transparent about what “deliverables” their customers could expect.
 
(Do you see where I’m going with this, First name / friend? I feel like you probably do).
 
There’s a LOT of chatter online about how important it is to list your prices on your website.
 
To which I say…
Because while transparent pricing is a VERY important place to start with being open and clear and honest on your website, it’s just really that—only the START.
 
We also need to be open and clear and honest about who it’s for (and not for), what’s included (and not included) and what people can expect while they work with you (and after they work with you!).
 
This is a HUGE part of empathy-first, connection-driven copy, and the sales page I just wrote for my friend Maggie and her YNAB Budget Coaching offer is an excellent example (if I do say so myself) of how to put this into practice.
 
On Maggie’s sales page, we:
→ Set *very* clear expectations about what's involved in working together
→ Gave super specific details about what results and deliverables clients could expect—never vague claims
→ Stayed completely honest about the challenges rather than just selling benefits
→ Created appropriate boundaries around roles and responsibilities
→ Used authentic language that we knew would feel conversational and straightforward (while STILL converting!)
 
By being totally transparent, the copy filters out people who *aren’t* the right fit for the offer, while building trust with people who *are* genuinely looking for the specific type of support Maggie offers.
 
And there are zero hard feelings when someone doesn't inquire—because you know your website is just out there helping people make the right choice for themselves.
 
(AND saving you time from meeting with unaligned leads!)
 
Wanna stalk the case study and the finished sales page? 👀
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Not me reading through it again for fun because her brand voice was just perfect blend of playful + sassy + quirky !!! 😍 
 
NOW—if you want me to write YOU some honest, conversational copy (in whatever voice matches *your* brand, because conversational copywriting is not just for the playful + sassy + quirky pals!)...
 
There just so happen to be some openings on my copy calendar that you need to know about ✨
HOW TO WORK
 TOGETHER IN Q2
April Openings:
→ ONE website copy project
→ ONE email or launch copy project
 
May Openings:
→ TWO website copy projects
→ ONE (or maybe two 🙃) email or launch copy projects
 
AND!! A newsletter retainer spot just opened up for Q2 as well 🕺🏻
 
So, if you wanna make Q2 your ~moment~ to finally send out your website URL or your sales page or your newsletter with some “I can't WAIT for people to read this” energy… let’s chat! 
 
Check out the (soon to be updated 🤞 ) website here for more details, or, of course, reach out with any Qs!
 
You know where to find me ;)
 
A little real-life recap:
 
🥄 What I’m eating (other than breadsticks): I'm pumped to make homemade pizzas this week! This my go-to when we make them at home—if you're into veggie pizzas (skipping all the gross veggies, ofc) and want something you can drizzle hot honey on… you'll ❤️ this!
 
📚 What I’m reading: Finished Wedding People, finished The Happily Ever After Playlist… now reading my sixth Abby Jimenez book, The Friend Zone!
 
📺 What I’m watching: Seriously considering *RE*WATCHING the Severance season finale?! If you've already seen it too, please DM me so we can chat.
 
💻 What I’m working on: Emails, emails, emails! Onboarding emails, welcome sequence emails, and then weekly newsletters for a retainer client 💌 

Need done-for-you copy? ✏️✨ Here's how I can help:
 
→ Website Copy: SEO-optimized, conversion-focused, conversational and true-to-YOU
→ Email Marketing: Weekly Emails, Welcome Sequences, & more
→ Launch Copy: Launch Emails, Sales Pages, and Onboarding Sequences
 
or reply back with your questions!

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