Last month's prompt was the first line from Flannery O'Connor's
A Good Man is Hard to Find: “The grandmother didn't want to go to Florida.”
In the original, things go south from there.
Friends, we had an overwhelming number of responses, all of which were wonderful.
Here are three, chosen at random:
“Virginia sat petting her golden retriever. The grandmother didn't want to go to Florida. She didn't want to do anything but stay right where she was.” (Mary from the Heartland.)
“As soon as Mavis learned that her Grammie had received a debilitating diagnosis of scurvy because of a rare allergy to citrus products, she pounced on the opportunity to fly Grammie to the world famous Sunshine Med Spa in Miami for a cutting edge vitamin C blood transfusion treatment. The grandmother didn't want to go to Florida. Mavis had to devise a plan to lull her hemophobic grandmother into getting on that plane because Mavis was dead-set on marrying a rich doctor.” (Lisa Leigh of Los Angeles.)
“She was startled when he grasped her by the elbow. The Grandmother did not want to go to Florida. The mother, lover and friend were all making compelling cases, but the grandmother in her was stubbornly pushing back against them all.” (Liam from Australia.)
Thank you to all who shared your work!