Team, you had some fantastic responses! Here are a few, chosen at random.
“Descending into the darkness, the mine shaft eliminated the ability to distinguish day from night. Everyone had always said that John would be a preacher when he grew up, just like his father. But the mountain’s calling had been stronger, pulling him down under the earth like it had for so many boys in his town.”
— Sarah
“She was heard when she spoke but there was something more. People could feel something in her voice something different. Everyone had always said that John would be a preacher when he grew up, just like his father. But John knew his path would be different, a different role to nourish a voice. The voice would be hers.”— Cassandra
“He was charismatic and could inspire anyone to do better. Everyone had always said that John would be a preacher when he grew up, just like his father. But then one day something extraordinary happened.”— Mary Pat
Mary Pat leaving us on the edge! I love it.
Thank you to all who shared your work.